Lunch-Box Dream

Right now in my book the family is on a vacation looking at civil war battle fields and they the parents are going through troubles which is concerning to the children. Also the one child bobby is questioning how his grandpa died and seems like he is going through a lot and has a lot of stress. Along with that he feels as if his parents like his brother more and that he will never be able to accomplish what his brother has.
below i copied a website with a reading about chattanooga civil war battlefields
http://voices.yahoo.com/the-top-civil-war-attractions-chattanooga-tennessee-74703.html

Lunch-box Dream

In my book they have started to talk more about how old the characters are and how they interact with each other. They have showed how the different families grew up. The book is still slow and the two families don't really interact with each other.  They dont get to tell you alot between the chapters and they dont talk about one of the family that often.

lunch-box dream

My book has definitely gotten better as I have read father. I still don't think I would recommend it to anyone just because of how slow the beginning is. I hope that the book gets good enough in the end that I would recommend it to some one and they would enjoy the book. I may just not enjoy the book because of how it is written and some people may have read it and really enjoyed it.

Lunch-box Dream

I believe that the theme in my book would be don't judge somebody to quickly get to know them before you can judge them. My book shows the life of a white family and a colored family and how they compare to each other. And how they interact with others and their own family. At this time period different races were judged dramatically differently. Even though they are very alike in their normal life. They are also always thinking about if the other race acts like they do.